芝加哥大学申请Essay 1写作要点及范文给定

unger for more, but I keep that a secret. The mail you send is such a tease; I like to imagine additional words on the page. Words like "you're accepted" or "you're awesome!" or "don't worry, she still loves you!" but I know they're all lies. You never called after that one time, I visited you thrice, but you never come around anymore. Tell me, was I just one in a line of many? Was I just another supple "applicant" to you, looking for a place to live, looking for someone to teach me the ways of the world? The closeness between us was beautiful, it couldn't he been just me that felt it, I know you felt it too. The intimacy was akin to that of scholar and original text, your depth as a person is astounding! To be honest, I must confess I had already dreamt of a rosy future together, one filled with late nights and long discussions over the Gothic era and the ethical stage of Kierkegaard, we would watch the sunset together and spend every Christmas snuggled in blankets. Eventually we would get older, I would become a well-educated corporate lawyer and you would enrich yourself within the domain of human knowledge. Your cup overfloweth with academic genius, pour a little on me. You're legendary for it, they all told me it would never work out between us, but I had hope. I had so much hope; I replied to your adorable letters and put up with your puns. I knew going into it that you would be an expensive one to keep around, I accounted for all that; I understand someone of your caliber and taste. And now you inquire as to my wishes? They're simple, accept me for who I am! Why can't you just love and not ask why? Not ask about my assets or my past? I'm living in the now, I'm waiting for you to catch up, but you're too caught up in my past, I offer us a future together, not a past to dwell upon. Whenever I'm around you, I just get that tingle deep inside me that tells me you're the one; you he that air of brilliance and ingenuity that I cre in a person, you're so mature and sophisticated, originality is really your strongest and most admirable trait. I wish we could be together, I still think in my heart of hearts we were meant to be, but you he to meet me halfway, dear. I'm on one knee here with tears welling up in my eyes, the fireworks are timed and ready to light up the night sky for you, just say 'I accept...you.' Always, Rohan 实例二阶：

优点

1. 对作答的创造性理解

核发者同样了一个并不尤其的角度看，他将哥伦比亚大学比作一个初恋，这给五年制职遗留下了深刻的感触。如果你也必需找到一种截然不同的写成角度看，同样会使你的essay脱颖而成哦！

2. 完整地反驳作答

尽管角度看并不尤其，但核发者依然做到了面面俱到，他提到了将要的期望（踏入一名律师），详述了自己的各项天份（哥特式开端，和哲学xxx），从该学校共享人力资源的截然不同性阐释了自己最喜欢哥伦比亚大学的缘故。他甚至提到了自己三次访问校园，对校园尤其是在极富的天份，如果你也想以这种方式开展合著，叮嘱务必在着重于创意的同时着重于essay的完整性。不够多essay写成方法有技巧叮嘱登录www.emwchinese.com阅读。

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Essay 2 作答一览

对于essay 2，高等院校一般会共享六个作答，核发者可以根据提示和自己的必需开展同样；作答概要基本每年亦会不够新，但量基本保持基本，有所增加一般不会多达一个。这些作答同样是由哥伦比亚大学的任教校友或在校教师的；在字数尤其，与弊端1一样审批1-2页纸即可。

我们先来郑中基2021/2022学年的六个“奇葩”essay作答是什么：

作答1：

What if the moon were made of cheese? Or Neptune made of soap? Pick a celestial object, reimagine its material composition, and explore the implications. Feel free to explore the realms of physics, philosophy, fantasy…the sky is the limit! —Inspired by Tate Flicker, Class of 2025 如果月亮是用起司做的会怎样？或者如果海王星是由构成的会怎样呢？叮嘱分派一个海王星，重新现实生活它的液体结构，并洞察由此产生的影响。人文科学领域不可有，物理、和哲学等等均可，新颖体现你天马行空的现实生活力，广袤OB尤其是在无可有的有可能！

作答2：

What’s so easy about pie?

—Inspired by Arjun Kalia, Class of 2025

是什么让“pie”如此简单？

作答3：

In Homer's Iliad, Helen had a “face that launched a thousand ships.” A millihelen, then, measures the beauty needed to launch one ship. The Sagan unit is used to denote any large quantity (in place of “billions and billions”). A New York Minute measures the period of time between a traffic light turning green and the cab behind you honking. Invent a new unit of measurement. How is it derived? How is it used? What are its equivalents?

—Inspired by Carina Kane, Class of 2024, and Ishaan Goel, Class of 2025

在《变形记》中都，奥维德在描述珍妮的美艳程度时写道，珍妮拥尤其是在可以“使千艘战舰速射的外表”。那么按照这个话说法，等于珍妮（即千分之一的珍妮）就可以使一艘战舰船队；与之近似于，一萨根可以用以话指明任何相当可观的量（替代几十亿），纽约一分钟指代的是交通灯变绿后你身旁的成租车鸣笛召来你的时间段。

根据以上的逻辑，叮嘱造出一个全新的测量基本单位，并阐释它是如何得成的？又怎样用作？它的映射基本单位又是什么？

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作答4：

"There is no such thing as a new idea" - Mark Twain. Are any pieces of art, literature, philosophy, or technology truly original, or just a different combination of old ideas? Pick something, anything (besides yourself), and explain why it is, or is not, original.

—Inspired by Haina Lu, Class of 2022

马克·吐温话说“并未只不过质的新期望。”那么是否有任何艺术、文学、和哲学或科技小话说是总称真正的原创呢？或者话说无论是什么小话说，都只是仍未实际上的期望的重新组合罢了？分派一件件物品（除了你自己），并阐释为什么它是原创，又或者为什么它不是原创。

作答5：

It's said that history repeats itself. But what about other disciplines? Choose another field (chemistry, philosophy, etc.) and explain how it repeats itself. Explain how it repeats itself.

—Inspired by Ori Brian, AB’19

人们总话说“近代在不断重演”，那么其他人文科学呢？除近代外，同样一个其他的人文科学领域（化学，和哲学等），并阐释话指明它是如何重演的。

作答6：

In the spirit of adventurous inquiry (and with the encouragement of one of our current students!) choose one of our past prompts (or create a question of your own). Be original, creative, thought provoking. Draw on your best qualities as a writer, thinker, visionary, social critic, sage, citizen of the world, or future citizen of the University of Chicago; take a little risk, and he fun!

一切都是展现自己的革新与探索精神吗？你自己的弊端吧！或者在我们曾多次的作答中都同样一个开展问到，决心你的问到具备艺术性，优雅天赋且荒诞，最大程度地展现成你作为散文家，思想家，社会上批评家以及社会上公民或者哥伦比亚大学将要教师的优良品质与必需，勇往直前尝试，再来有意外之喜！

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